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Miles of sand

Brutal sun aggresses the desert.
Sand dunes far as I can see.
Suddenly appears a cactus flower.
A vision not a mirage.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 6:20 PM
reminded me of the many years I lived in the dessert. Those cacti were just stunning against the beige sand.
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 8:00 PM
What a lovely experience ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Hello Lin, It sounds like you were in a dessert. I could be wrong. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Hello Lin, Oh! Well I thought you were in a real dessert. Enjoyed your poem. Hugs. Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 6:29 PM
I was in a desert in my mind ~ but I'm always up for dessert !
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 10:26 AM
What a lovely write and Great Picture you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thanks, Paula ~ have a fabulous day !
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