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Miles Apart

holding me tight
eyes oceans away
are you already gone



Submitted on October 19, 2017 for contest CONTEST #350 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2017

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October 25, 2017 at 9:02 AM

The beauty of the form is a lot in a little, you achieved it here Line, congratulations...

October 25, 2017 at 6:41 PM

Thanks Charlie. So nice of you to visit and leave me a note.

October 22, 2017 at 12:55 PM

Much said in short form, Line! CONGRATS! Janice

October 23, 2017 at 7:56 PM

Thanks, Janice. I appreciate your visit.

October 22, 2017 at 9:13 AM

I usually pass up little haiku-type poems. But I did a double take on this, and then really appreciated it.

October 23, 2017 at 7:55 PM

Thank you Hannah, I take that as a compliment. Glad to have made an impact.

Dale Gregory Cozart

October 22, 2017 at 8:16 AM

Very nice, Line. Congrats on your win.

October 23, 2017 at 7:45 PM

Thanks, Dale. Appreciate your visit.

October 22, 2017 at 6:18 AM

Congrats Line, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest! ;-)

October 22, 2017 at 7:17 AM

Thanks Teddy. Have an awesome week!

Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2017 at 8:58 PM

That was a really awesome middle line. Good luck in Brian's contest, Line.

October 19, 2017 at 9:43 PM

Thanks Andrea. Just mixing it up with the styles.

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