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Miles Apart - Questionku

holding me tight eyes oceans away are you already gone Submitted on October 19, 2017 for contest CONTEST #350 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 10/25/2017 9:02:00 AM

The beauty of the form is a lot in a little, you achieved it here Line, congratulations...

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2017 6:41:00 PM

Thanks Charlie. So nice of you to visit and leave me a note.

Date: 10/22/2017 12:55:00 PM

Much said in short form, Line! CONGRATS! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:56:00 PM

Thanks, Janice. I appreciate your visit.

Date: 10/22/2017 9:13:00 AM

I usually pass up little haiku-type poems. But I did a double take on this, and then really appreciated it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Hannah, I take that as a compliment. Glad to have made an impact.

Date: 10/22/2017 8:16:00 AM

Very nice, Line. Congrats on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:45:00 PM

Thanks, Dale. Appreciate your visit.

Date: 10/22/2017 6:18:00 AM

Congrats Line, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest! ;-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/22/2017 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Teddy. Have an awesome week!

Date: 10/19/2017 8:58:00 PM

That was a really awesome middle line. Good luck in Brian's contest, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2017 9:43:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Just mixing it up with the styles.