Miles

Paula Swanson Contest Name Miles of war n death n sweet kismet, and love so everlasting, to die, give up your last sweet breath, just when, love was there for the asking. re: vie's "Miles" verse...

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/2/2012 9:13:00 PM

Wow, a great entry. I love the word kismet. I can get lost in just one word. A winner in my book. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:02:00 PM

nice..entry..Don, good luck in the contest..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/2/2012 8:43:00 PM

What a fantastic write my friend! I liked especially the third line which states, "to die, give up your last sweet breath," this of which I think is the best part of your poem! It was the pivot line I believe! I enjoyed your write very much that I have read this evening Don! Thanks for sharing this write with us all! Great Work!!