Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Mild winter day

One best thing,  is a mild winter day
Fresh air, not too hot, beauty on display
Instead of green grass, pure white snow brings light
Even when the sun is completely out of sight
The ice along the brook, forms crystals on the edge
The snow creates patches on the mountain's ledge
All is still , but the birds that I see fly
and an old leaf from fall drifts in air going by
Winter speaks when the wind starts to blow
And the answers stitch together, like something you sow

Heidi Sands

1/9/26

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Joanna Daniel January 14, 2026 at 1:38 AM Lovely scenery described with eloquence, Heidi:) Heidi Sands January 14, 2026 at 6:08 AM Thank you. It was beautiful at sunset yesterday too . I hope you have a nice day :)

Victor Buhagiar January 12, 2026 at 1:35 AM Hopefully we will have a lot of those fine days. Heidi Sands January 12, 2026 at 6:13 AM Yes, hopefully we will. Thank you Victor :)

Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2026 at 12:37 PM Your "Mild winter day" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this one. Stay Warm... Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away................. Heidi Sands January 11, 2026 at 1:25 PM Thank you Paula. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day writing too. Hugs :)

Joe Maverick January 11, 2026 at 12:53 AM Melodious in script Heidi..A pleasure to Vist.' Stay away from the ledge though Don't know how deeps the snow.' We've had tiny buds on the trees in London from November..They have Gone static in this early January though All the best in 2026.) Heidi Sands January 11, 2026 at 5:37 AM Hi Joe. Thank you for the kind comment. I hope you have a fulfilling New Year! :)

Jerry Brotherton January 9, 2026 at 5:43 PM powerful imagery Heidi. Have a wonderful weekend. Heidi Sands January 9, 2026 at 6:14 PM Thank you Jerry. I hope you have a great weekend too :)

Joseph May January 9, 2026 at 2:09 PM "Winter speaks when the wind starts to blow And the answers stitch together, like something you sow", Very nicely penned Heidi Heidi Sands January 9, 2026 at 2:16 PM Thank you so much Joseph . I appreciate your comment :)