Mighty Sword

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His pen mighty sword An ocean of ink awaits Blank the pages remain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 January 2018

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Silent One

Date: 1/27/2018 9:02:00 AM

Awesome haiku!

Maria Williams

Date: 1/27/2018 1:23:00 AM

The pen is mightier than the sword as they say. Perhaps the Muse is just having a little break, and will be back in all her fine glory. Great Haiku as always, dearest friend....Maria xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/26/2018 10:59:00 AM

May your pen be always active....Hugs, dear.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/26/2018 11:36:00 AM

I pray, it always will with Muse's inspiration of course for impossible will be otherwise dearest, Eileen! Thank you so much! Filakia!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2018 5:32:00 AM

Perhaps momentary loss of thoughts, perhaps the sword needs to tone down to capture softer emotions..you have given us a moment to ponder, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/26/2018 6:43:00 AM

Challenging poet's thought only positive results may bring! Thank you my dear friend, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2018 5:18:00 AM

- Words on paper are a message to the reader and can be stronger than a sword - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/26/2018 6:41:00 AM

True my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your lovely comment! Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2018 1:54:00 AM

In the dry barren desert of your thoughts you sometimes have to await the rains. Regards Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/26/2018 3:13:00 AM

Thank you for the advice my friend, Tom, however, my pages do not remain blank for She is still generous enough to inspire me! The Muse holds our Pen , we are just the instrument to put on paper Her dictations.At least that is what I believe and I am so thankful each time she inspires me to write even a single line!