Mighty Snail

i once knew a slimy snail
who had a great big fat tail
he had a mighty push
from his enormous tush
speeding down his gooey trail

tmc
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Gauthier Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 3:53 PM
that is one slimy and gooey poem, Timothy ~
Deschler Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Your humorous poem just put a smile on my face this evening Timothy... and I think that is something we all could use right now... Keep up the great writing my friend!
Mcguire Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Thank you Kelly!
Laurie Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 4:15 PM
G’day Timothy … I trust you are well. A fine limerick indeed. Makes a snail easy to find if you eat them - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Ha, ha! That last line is just fabulous, Timothy! Speeding...gooey trail... Love it! Thanks, Gershon
Mcguire Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Thank you Gershon!
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:47 PM
ha ha ha love it:-) hugs jan xx
Mcguire Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Jan!
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