Midwesterner's Lament

     Kentucky never did pull me
        Neither did Tennessee

     Kansas, best left to Dorothy
        ~ O, for the beaches of Waikiki
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Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:48 PM
This is neither here nor there (so to speak), but I've been to Waikiki and Tennessee, and I, too, lean toward Waikiki - wonderful. On the other hand, this might be because I had a horrible flu my entire week in Nashville, and didn't get a chance to listen to the great music.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Then again, no bears wandered over to your vehicle and began looking for honey... Happens in Nashville, I've heard. Well, actually they're looking for my wife. ~ Dolly Parton's husband
Mckeithan Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:58 PM
Waikiki isnt for me, give me Tennessee. I was born there. Like the Smokey Mountains.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 7:52 PM
I remember those mountains. Only we called them 'The Smoking Mountains.' ~ All Lit Up
Buehler Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:05 PM
Love your wistful lament, Gershon. 'Weather' you visit Waikiki or not, It's still s nice thought. :D
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:16 PM
Ha, ha. I don't know if I can 'weather' your 'Weather.' lol. Thanks Evelyn.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 2:24 PM
I agree with you about Kansas. Dorothy can have that flat, colorless piece of land. I'd really like being on a beach....I love the Cayman Island beaches...pristine! yellow rose
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Aw, the Midwest isn't that bad, is it? ~ Dyed-in-the-wool Midwesterner.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 10:04 PM
Love this. However. I am an Iowa transplanted to Utah and I really miss the Midwest and the cute fireflies at night
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Get out there and pick those potatoes, Andrea. ~ Corn and Beans
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