Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Other

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Contest : Tanka - Haiku

Sponsored by: Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 30-07-2025

 

 

 

Midway

                                        gusty torrid waves
                                 no songbird waves in the wind
                                 no waves from sapped leaves
                                   specious waves of mirages
                                folks in waves running to pools


                                    pigment change in leaves
                                 ester smell of full blown fruits
                                        heading toward fall


                        
                                                Place: 3rd

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Sara Kendrick August 6, 2025 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Sara K Patri Venkata Ramana August 7, 2025 at 6:47 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Oliver Mckeithan August 3, 2025 at 10:46 AM Congrats on your placement in my contest Patri. The senses come alive your poem Patri Venkata Ramana August 3, 2025 at 9:55 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.