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Midsummer Night's Eve Stroll

An evening stroll, on Midsummer Night's Eve , under the silver light of the horizon moon. Life that burst among a small acreage, of old-growth forests, flourished. A delightful flurry of fireflies, drifting, twinkle among the foliage, an amazing sight. Echoing sounds moan through bough and leaves disturbed the night grew cold and grim. A sudden quiet came, not a whisper, of leaf or waving bough, not a breath of wind. The forest was swathed in gloomy shadow. As I come upon an old museum adorned with monolith standing stones. Dim shadows obscured the eerie dark opening, which formed a prelude to rivalries between evil and light. Curiosity reeled me in, as my freighted body trembles. What horrors wait inside? Annoying pride! Please! Don't patronize me.", I told myself. And awful, clenching nauseous feeling came over me, with every step into the dark gruesome cavernous hall. I didn't' want to walk any farther. The moonlight sunk in casting shadows onto the walls. Hideous, vicious grins sneered from carvings against the walls. A sanctuary once filled with strange world treasures, gold and jade idols, scepters, swords and masks embellished in jewels. Finding, on a marble pedestal sat a crystal oval jar , with a picturesque opaque lid with a two inch statue of the goddess Athena, in a long flowing gown, she held a spear on her right, and a golden shield on the left . An alcove on the far end of the wall sat a fiery red hair maiden, wearing a flowing emerald green gown plucking the strings on a harp. The musical sounds capturing the attention of whimsical creatures, as a shimmering white Unicorn sat by her side. Aromatic fragrance drifted within the room with scent of blossoms and the cool sea filled the air. I found it beautiful, warm, and embracing. Not vindictive, but a smitten angel from heaven subduing nature. An exciting victorious and fortunate feeling flowed through my body, as I stared at her angelic sight. 7/17/2016
Athena is the goddess of wisdom, courage, inspiration, civilization, law and justice, mathematics, strength, war strategy, the arts, crafts, and skill in ancient Greek religion and mythology.
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Daniel Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest, Eve:) a magical experience..
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thank you so very much, Jo, sorry I'm so late with my thank you's your always very inspiring :) Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Congrats Eve to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:27 AM
awe, love the picture... Eve, Congratulations on your awesome placement. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Lovely, magical story you wove, Eve. Congratulations on your fine podium win in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 8:07 AM
You put a lot of thought into this one and the result was amazing. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 4:57 PM
dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Neumann Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Congrats Eve, for your placement with this fine, enchanting piece!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM
A challenging write Eve, congratulations...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Congrats on your Eve with this fascinating use of 21 words. :) Sunita
Dutta Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Congrats Eve to win on your beautiful poem. Hugs.
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:00 PM
lovely picture painted in one's mind Eve congrats on 3rd place hugs soup mail!
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Thank you for this beautiful creation. Will take it with me to put under my pillow as I drift off into a guaranteed peaceful sleep. have to give 7 as you wove your magic using just the silk you were given. David in NZ.
Onclaud Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:33 PM
ohh, this is a full-blown story well conveyed..so beautiful, eve!..huggs
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 3:32 PM
wow Eve I am in awe of your creativity - you have woven the words into an amazing tale:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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