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Midsummer Dip

I savor sunshine - its voracious heat
as I drizzle sweet lemonade
on my dehydrated tongue.

I dip my toes into the fondant
of lemon afternoon. You’ll find me
wading in the aquamarine swoon.

My coral-colored swimsuit, one piece
tease of a midsummer’s sea;
saltine-salvation with a tangerine squeeze.

Chartreuse eyes, like a key lime pie,
Ray-Ban protected ~ *
dessert winks at her sublime prize.

Quite crimson, I become, forgetting
to reapply sunscreen, with a rub-a-dub-dub,**
as I sunbathe near my ocean tub.

Clueless after hours on the beach,
my love dives into his watermelon treat,
a breach of spousal ethics to my cause.

With a pouty lip and grifting-tears, I con
his palm to soak me down with aloe vera,
and grant me two-fisted cocktail sips.

The saffron sun dips on the zephyr’d beach.
A welcoming arm rounds my shoulders ~
lavender and lilac speech of twilight.

4/9/2021
Contest: Changing Colors
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Required words are highlighted in bold letters
Internal/End Rhymes
24 lines

Ray-Ban — brand of sunglasses
Rub-a-dub-dub — nursery rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Your poem has made the colors sound more amazing that well....just colors.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 6:20 PM
Thank you
Proxenos Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Superb poetry and how you highlighted the scorching heat with with cool cocktail - very creative Kim. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Jennifer
Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Fascinating, gripping -- and delightful, Kim. Wonderful contest entry. Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Gershon
One Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 6:00 AM
You did this so well.. love the sunny and cool imagery... oh i cant wait for such days..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Ahh...right?! Thank you, my wonderful friend!
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 5:27 AM
Oh, how delightful are the colors you painted with your words! Enjoyed the ride with you Kim. Loved your line: lavender and lilac speech of twilight.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:10 AM
Wondaful poem. How well you used those words. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thank you so much, Victor!
Ligon Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Great job putting the colors together in a fluid scene.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Juliet!
DiMino Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Totally delightful! Great writing!!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Buehler Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 8:33 PM
This is exquisite, Kim! The tantalizing colors and fantastic imagery are pure delight. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Thank you always — to the brightest colors I know that flow from my dear Evelyn’s pen! You inspire me! xxoo
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