Midnightmare

The moon's a globule 
Assymetrically-specked
Freckled with moonrocks
Wolves roost and shriek off-tuned hymn-- -
Tufts of fear drip-drop   elsewhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
October 18, 2008 at 10:21 AM
Chilling and eerie - and an imaginative and spirited Tanka! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest. Peace always, John
Mason Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 9:32 AM
Oooh, this is really spooky ... smile!! What a wonderful write, Gino and congratulations on the well-deserved win in Kristin's contest! I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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October 12, 2008 at 2:19 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it selected as one of the winners in Kristin's contest! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations Gino on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
Spence Sr Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 4:51 PM
This is excellent. I like the images the pieces reflects. Your use of figurative language is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
Lokken Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 12:42 PM
Amazing depth to this intricate tanka. Quite brilliant. Regards, Sara
Burton Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 11:10 PM
wow this is great too.
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