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Midnightmare

The moon's a globule Assymetrically-specked Freckled with moonrocks Wolves roost and shriek off-tuned hymn-- - Tufts of fear drip-drop elsewhere.

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John Heck

Date: 10/18/2008 10:21:00 AM

Chilling and eerie - and an imaginative and spirited Tanka! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest. Peace always, John

Sue Mason

Date: 10/13/2008 9:32:00 AM

Oooh, this is really spooky ... smile!! What a wonderful write, Gino and congratulations on the well-deserved win in Kristin's contest! I look forward to reading more of your writing!

Date: 10/12/2008 2:19:00 PM

The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it selected as one of the winners in Kristin's contest! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/12/2008 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations Gino on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/18/2008 4:51:00 PM

This is excellent. I like the images the pieces reflects. Your use of figurative language is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph

Sara Lokken

Date: 9/10/2008 12:42:00 PM

Amazing depth to this intricate tanka. Quite brilliant. Regards, Sara

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/31/2008 11:10:00 PM

wow this is great too.