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Midnight Visit

Thump and flutter, scared me at first you see. Again a flutter, flapping, what could it be, Then as I peered at window above me, What did my eyes look upon, oh golly gee? Red bird upon the screen, was it a he or a she. No matter of fact makes any difference to thee. I grabbed my camera quick, before it could flee. Zooming in with the lens, capturing it free, Flittering, now still its tail spread outwardly. Upon the flash, the red bird flew into a tree. I quickly pressed buttons almost every key. Hoping, I captured the red bird frantically. I captured this redbird upon the screen easily. Now I had proof of my midnight visit, truly. This night, a beautiful red bird, visited quickly. What purpose or sign did it have any physically? No idea, maybe just a crazy red bird’s decree, No matter what, it is a proven, real live story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 10:01:00 PM
Written amazingLY, Cecil! Great use of the monorhyme form to tell this story of the bird you captured with your camera. It must have been a cardinal, right? The birds here seem to hide away in the evening. Good luck in the monorhyme contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:58:00 AM
I had the same exprience years ago when I wanted to tale a picture of the red bird. Was it a cardinal? I too wrote a poem on it. Well penned, Cecil
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