Red Fiery Poet Rhyme

Midnight Verse-Introducing: Red Fiery and Poet Destroyer

The raven sky colored with white clouds 
lifted its veil 
Patiently waiting for its radiance to reveal 
I watch these stars while you bathe in the sun 
Our two world's apart, still the sky is one 
The sunlight touches my warm feet, 
While the gentle breeze embraces your heart beat 

Stardust and Nightingales paint the sky 
worldwide 
As the sun turns in, now it's my time to hide 
Tonight I embrace the same stars you slept with 
Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth 
This night I tuck my nightmares under my pillow, 
Bathed by the stars, you romanced with your glow 


Thank you so much Poet Destroyer for collaborating with me...Hugs Red

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Brian Dempsey May 17, 2016 at 10:00 AM What a wonderful collaboration! Very lovely imagery. :)

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2016 at 7:03 PM Hello Red, stopping by to say hi. :) enjoying our collaboration once again. LINDA Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:40 AM You are awesome Linda :)

Robert Lindley March 27, 2016 at 9:14 AM A clear example of two extremely talented poets created a masterpiece. Adding this jewel to my fav list.. You two weaved a tapestry that delights the reader! Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:41 AM Thanx Robert ! I appreciate your visits...:)

Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2016 at 11:10 AM Good morning Red. Hugs Rick. Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:42 AM Hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2016 at 2:02 PM This is fantastic, Red Fiery. One thing about PD. She is SO GOOD at taking another person's poetry and matching it in flavor! I don't even know which part is hers and which part is yours. That is the sign of a really nice collab. YES! Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:43 AM Dear Andrea, you are a fantastic writer ...thank you for supporting my work too..:)

Nette Onclaud March 20, 2016 at 1:47 PM stuning collab from you and PD... such lilting flow, ohh!..huggs Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:44 AM thank you Nette...:) I appreciate your support and ur visits...xxx

Ralph Sergi March 20, 2016 at 7:43 AM Hi Red: Beautiful collaboration! Thank you for your comment my poem.

Timothy Hicks March 20, 2016 at 12:43 AM "Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth" how deliciously poetic, Red. I'm loving the marriage of dark and light ... the physical distance being no match for the emotional connection, between you and your love. And oh ... tucking your nightmares under your pillow. That's a sweet visual. You two worked very well together! Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 1:48 AM Thank you so much Timothy... ;)

Tim Smith March 19, 2016 at 10:27 PM Very nice collaboration. The stars definitely aligned : Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:44 AM Thank you Tim:) I like ur love poems tooo...:)

Constance La France March 19, 2016 at 8:40 PM Red, you both did an amazing job writing this poem, it is hard to tell who is who, it flows so well together, well done you two, 7~ Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:46 AM Thank you Broken wings..) You lifeted my soul with some of your poems...I really mean it !

Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2016 at 7:25 PM You both wrote magnificent lines! Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:46 AM Thank you dear...:)

Cherl Dunn March 19, 2016 at 1:16 PM Dear Red A wonderful collaborating with the two of you, a perfect match fullfilled in line and verse, great job ladies with such excellent imagery left behind in the minds of your readers, awesomely inspirational, cheri dunn and thanks for the review of my piece also glad you liked it so much, cheri Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:48 AM Thank u Cherl...:)

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 19, 2016 at 10:37 AM Some great imagery produced there, and your two styles compliment each other admirably. Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:49 AM Thank you Johny Boy...:) How did you celebrate your birthday?

Paul Callus March 19, 2016 at 9:50 AM I read elsewhere about this co-write which was in the making, Red, and I've been watching out for it. I love how you two interact world's apart; distance is no deterrent! The opening and closing lines wrap the contents beautifully! Well done!! ~ hugs // paul Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 9:47 AM Thank you dearest...ur poems are a delight...:)

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2016 at 9:36 AM I'm glad and had the honors in writing with you, much please to enjoy the same stars. Red Fiery, you did amazingly with connecting the stars... like you said, AS ONE.... Enjoyed... a 7 and favorite. Love Linda Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2016 at 7:25 PM Well done Linda.