Midnight Train

A bold intrusion has prevailed                                                                    
Where branches bend, and night-birds nest 
The starry night has been impaled  

A bold intrusion has prevailed 
The starry night has been impaled  
Against the sky where moonlight crests 

A bold intrusion, has prevailed 
Where branches bend, and night-birds nest 


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A silver chain is southward bound   
Where weary creatures rest at ease,   
but scatter now, upon the sound.   

A silver chain is southward bound  
And clouds of dust, rise off the ground,  
This flash of light-speed stirs the leaves  
 
A silver streak is southward bound  
where weary creatures rest at ease



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In honor of the contest: "Triolet" sponsored by Giorgio Veneto
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 1, 2013 at 2:51 PM
love it Carrie, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA
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August 24, 2013 at 7:40 PM
My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Carrie! This is a great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing as well. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:46 PM
an awesome win Carrie... SKAT
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August 24, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~Caryl
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Great work, Carrie. Congratulations. . Love, Joyce
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August 23, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Adams Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 12:46 PM
congrats on your win with this lovely gem!
May Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 8:12 AM
congrats on a great win Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Oh boy, oh boy now I want to know what the silver streak was?? MORE Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dua Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 4:55 AM
hey there ! A wonderful write !! I hope these comments are filling your inbox !! Love , Saanvi :))
Tacito Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Can't help but think of Gladys Knight's song "Midnight train to Georgia" as I read this. This was a gorgeous setting that you created here.
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August 15, 2013 at 11:04 PM
WOW Carrie, you have written an outstanding write here my friend! I just love how your put this poem together, a special train that moves through the imagination! I truly enjoyed reading this wondrous piece, what a powerful poem! Great Work!!
A   Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:23 PM
wow! Carrie, the poem is kind of dreamy in a way.. I like the get away sound... wishing you luck in the contest... Linda
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