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Midnight Thoughts On a Failed Marriage

How can you hear something stop? How do you know when it’s over? We were once lovers Friends I gazed at his sleeping face And looked into my heart I saw grey shadows of silence Floating in the emptiness That was when I realized I had to leave ‘Lest I completely disappear

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Annie Lander

Date: 12/19/2012 3:12:00 PM

I been there, many nights i gazed at his face and asked myself why... i couldn't foretell my future

Kj Hooten
Date: 12/19/2012 3:32:00 PM

i hope your future is/was better. I walked into several similar situations until I gave up. My 'love' now is a cat. Plus wonderful grandchildren. And I'm finally learning to honor myself. KJ

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/21/2012 6:26:00 PM

Reminds me of a Cary Simon song which I believe was called "I'ts too late Baby" It was also about a failed relationship. It is not easy to find a soulmate and you show clearly how one can be mistaken. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kj Hooten
Date: 11/24/2012 3:09:00 PM

Ah ha! Got help and can now reply to your kind comment. Thanks. I love Carly Simon. I love Love. With all my experience with it, I think my soulmate must be on the other side. Maybe we'll get together in the next life. Unless he digs old chicks...