David Bose Poet Sedoka

Midnight Swim

I still see that night
When silver washed over dunes
While we clutched, kissing deeply
‘Til glowing surf lured;
Then we stripped to mere moonbeams
And took a dip in love’s light.



September 7, 2017
Moonlight Delight Poetry Contest,
Russell Sivey, Sponsor

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Donna Roberts September 30, 2017 at 12:41 AM Sweet memories

Gregory Richard Barden September 13, 2017 at 10:45 PM Beautiful write, David, and like a memory from my past ... congrats on your win! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 9, 2017 at 11:41 PM Congratulations on your win, David.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2017 at 2:17 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith September 7, 2017 at 1:40 PM The old skinny dipper eh? Well done David, best wishes...

Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2017 at 1:18 PM Lovely!

Heidi Sands September 7, 2017 at 10:41 AM Excellent David. Good luck in the contest :)

Peter Rees September 7, 2017 at 10:09 AM Nice imagery. Wish I was there ! David Bose September 7, 2017 at 10:23 AM I'm glad you weren't! But thanks, I appreciate it.