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Midnight Swim

I still see that night When silver washed over dunes While we clutched, kissing deeply ‘Til glowing surf lured; Then we stripped to mere moonbeams And took a dip in love’s light. September 7, 2017 Moonlight Delight Poetry Contest, Russell Sivey, Sponsor

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Date: 9/30/2017 12:41:00 AM
Sweet memories
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful write, David, and like a memory from my past ... congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, David.
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Date: 9/9/2017 2:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 1:40:00 PM
The old skinny dipper eh? Well done David, best wishes...
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Date: 9/7/2017 1:18:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 9/7/2017 10:41:00 AM
Excellent David. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 10:09:00 AM
Nice imagery. Wish I was there !
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David Bose
Date: 9/7/2017 10:23:00 AM
I'm glad you weren't! But thanks, I appreciate it.

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