Midnight Run

Rising while others are falling fast asleep
Should I go? Now that ain't even a question 'cause baby girl gotta eat

And so does my wife, and I 
Gotta go! Yes, gotta make that run just so we can get by

Dreams! Sweet dreams of the future, both near and far
Reaching earnestly yet, they're like a distant, fading star

Running to punch someone else's clock, now this ain't ever made no man rich
I know it but I haven't found it, Yes, that good 'ol niche

Running, running, running, but to where?
Just trying to stay focused on that distant star as I persevere

SLOW DOWN! I say slow down 'cause what's gon' be, gon' be!
Every time I say this, I quickly remember that the car note is a month behind and the cupboards are empty
 
Running! Running into the night and days
Baby needs a new pair of shoes and still no pay raise

Lord! Being caught in this whirlwind makes me wanna holla.
Running, just running to make that mighty dollar

God knows I've been struggling to make these old ends meet. I've moved slow and fast
Don't know Lord, just don't know how long my energy gon' last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/5/2017 5:53:00 PM
yes this is a poem that people can relate to. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:41:00 AM
A poem that most people can relate with, purple, black and blue...
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Date: 11/20/2017 8:56:00 AM
Cool black earth truth, Stewart! Your poetry spin ghetto gold, bruh. Love the allusions and metaphors. Great lines throughout, esp ... running to punch someone else's clock. The ending is grand encore truth. Another PSoup house winner this poem be. Pulsar bright poetry. Love and peace forever.
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Date: 11/24/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback, Freddie! This is one of my favorites! I composed this after getting heavy doses of Miles - Freddie Freeloader. Lol
Date: 11/5/2017 6:15:00 PM
Great poem Stewart! I enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 11/5/2017 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, P.M.
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