Notes About The Poem

Midnight Mosque

In translucent silence
sapphire-capped minarets
stand like ardent rose buds
under glint of a firefly moon.

Gone are birds of day
like ruby breasted dawn
spilling ashes of roses
on a saffron horizon,
rhododendrons and azaleas floating
up high to burnish
the mosque's ghosted towers.

Through night's brisk lapis
the hushed teal dome bides
wafting apple breezes
as walls and turrets lumber,
shielding the tiled plaza
until morning steeps the landscape
in the aura of peacocks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Da Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 7:53 AM
I was impressed by the title, but the poem itself just captivated me in some way. This is so beautiful, as beautiful as the firefly moon..
Cozart Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for reading, Karen, and for your fine compliment.
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:54 PM
You truly have a gift for the unusual, for the exquisite use of words ! I'm in awe of your imagination :)
Cozart Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Thank you, Carrie.
Gentry Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win. Colorful imagery so vivid thru your words. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Thanks very much, Susan.
Barden Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Dale - blessings and best wishes for more! Superb imagery and flow - love this! :-)
Cozart Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Thanks much, Greg.
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Wow what amazingly exotic imagery, Dale. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Cozart Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Thank you, Line.
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 3:02 PM
ardent rose buds, ghosted towers, night's brisk lapis. what a way you have with phrases. beautiful as usual.
Cozart Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Wow Dale, this is simply gorgeous my friend! I also love the picture which enhances your poem! : )
Cozart Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Pandit Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Excellent in every way!
Cozart Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
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