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Midnight Moonlight

In my dreams we're dancing
        suspended
                  and in slow motion
the canopy of oaks and pines filter
        midnight moonlight
a spectral blue vision played out
before my waking moments

Clouds dull and cool these recollects
of when we owned the night
dawns' pale rosy rays
cancelling the holograph spinning
        just
                out of reach
but in my dreams we'll be forever dancing
to a melody all our own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2012 3:10:00 PM
Very beautiful poem and interesting style of writing! Thanx for your comment and congrats!
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Date: 4/14/2012 1:05:00 PM
Very awesome piece. "cancelling the holograph spinning ..just..out of reach" Loved those lines. Thanks for your gracious comments on my poems. (: I was on a long road trip from Nevada to California and I was gazing at the dark silhouettes of the magnificent mountains. I hope you had a great pleasant hike! Once again, this is a splendid poem. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:54:00 AM
wow! this is absolutely gorgeous! love it!
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