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Midnight Moonlight

In my dreams we're dancing suspended and in slow motion the canopy of oaks and pines filter midnight moonlight a spectral blue vision played out before my waking moments Clouds dull and cool these recollects of when we owned the night dawns' pale rosy rays cancelling the holograph spinning just out of reach but in my dreams we'll be forever dancing to a melody all our own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2012 3:10:00 PM
Very beautiful poem and interesting style of writing! Thanx for your comment and congrats!
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Date: 4/14/2012 1:05:00 PM
Very awesome piece. "cancelling the holograph spinning ..just..out of reach" Loved those lines. Thanks for your gracious comments on my poems. (: I was on a long road trip from Nevada to California and I was gazing at the dark silhouettes of the magnificent mountains. I hope you had a great pleasant hike! Once again, this is a splendid poem. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:54:00 AM
wow! this is absolutely gorgeous! love it!
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