Midnight Lullaby

I wrapped all my tears, to see you smile.
you are the best, always by my side.
I tell you my feelings will get you crying,
you must think I’m out of my mind.

You don’t know, what I know,
all the angels let me go.

We were born to teethe and die,
you will grow to be so fine.
Fall in love, feel your softer side,
Remember me when life is kind.

When you go, let me know,
don’t walk away like the world and go.

Life is rough and the world unkind,
fight them down and you will be fine.
The truth of live is a brutal sight,
make no mistakes, you can learn from mine.

You have a strong heart, you are unique
I treasure times when you smile at me.

Live the life, I could not find,
be there for me, when I say goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/21/2016 3:56:00 PM
Karan Patade, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2013 1:36:00 PM
Welcome to PS, Karan...Thank you for reading, "Pieces of Ecstasy". I just read your lovely poem and like it a lot! There's a hint of sadness we can all identify with...being concerned about our children living in an unkind world. Wonderful! Please keep writing! Always, Annalise
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Karan Patade
Date: 7/6/2013 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Annalise
Date: 6/10/2013 8:25:00 PM
KARAN, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 12:07:00 AM
Hey SKAT, thanks a bunch. I look forward to reading your work too. God bless
Date: 6/8/2013 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations!!! KARAN, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 12:07:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I was thrilled to see my name on the list too :)
Date: 6/8/2013 10:33:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing this..- Edward
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Edward :)
Date: 6/8/2013 5:56:00 AM
Very nice Karan.I'm new here also,but been writing all my life.Feel free to let me know when you post another.
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 12:08:00 AM
Thanks and welcome to Poetry Soup !!
Date: 6/8/2013 3:24:00 AM
Make no mistakes, you can learn from mine...that line is a boom!!! I particularly, like the ending of these piece. You are such a budding talent. It's great to read your piece this morning Karan, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 6:47:00 AM
Thanks you so much, I appreciate it !! :)
Date: 6/7/2013 8:34:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 6/7/2013 11:24:00 AM
Karan, a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/11/2013 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 6/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
Karan. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/7/2013 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, il have a look at it.
Date: 6/6/2013 7:42:00 AM
hi Karan! welcome to PSOUP ... love the wittiness of ur poem!...ELAi
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Karan Patade
Date: 6/7/2013 7:03:00 AM
Thank you :)
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