Kash Poet Poet Quintain (English)

Midnight In the Noon

Scented waves of your cloudy hair
will sure bring midnight in this noon,
my closed eyes seeing a beauty so rare
I am smelling a crazy full moon,
time puzzled, directionless,every moments swoon!




© kashinath karmakar 2011
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By :kashinath karmakar (13th March 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2013 at 1:02 AM always nice to reread your earlier work,Kash. Say, about my haiku for kisses in rain, how can I do kiss for the ONE picture that did not even talk about kissing? and yet she is giving extra points to do that one!! I think I won't win at all.

Gwendolen Song May 20, 2011 at 1:12 AM To the bengal tiger in you, Kash...an awesome lovesick and happy heart. Closing your eyes, time puzzled, and directionless..how head over heels in love you are! Sweeeeet. Gwendolen

Samir Georges March 14, 2011 at 12:32 PM is it just me who finds it difficult to rhyme and express myself fully? Then again, I am glad others don't suffer my poetic shortcomings, it means I yet have a chance to learn. A pleasant read, and thank you for the lesson dear kashinath.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 14, 2011 at 6:58 AM Wonderful words so expressive Kashinath to tempt the reader into wanting more and more of your lovely words... good luck in the contest... awesome as always...

Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 6:29 AM After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Kashinath. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2011 at 10:48 PM This one is very unique, Kashinath. Love that first line about scented waves of cloudy hair! Reminding you of midnight even at noon time, Very clever. Good luck in the contest, Kash! and thanks for your comments today.

Jimmy Anderson March 13, 2011 at 3:43 PM Very nice English Quintain...Jimmy

Michael J. Falotico March 13, 2011 at 2:53 PM I love the moon in the afternoon.. well said and such a joy to read your work..always Michael

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2011 at 11:18 AM Love the Passion..K.K.... midnight romance during the day.. what more could one ask for when it comes to the beauty form of your love... take care... p.d.

Nette Onclaud March 13, 2011 at 11:08 AM whoo, kashi, this is a wonderful, playful piece like a " crazy moon"! i lkey lots, lots! : huggs , nette