Midnight Hour

Midnight in my window, shines gold in the room
With a white-washed patina, to soften the gloom 
Sounds of the rafters,  speak like old friends
And the paleness of moonlight is brought by the wind
Clocks ticking onward, not missing a beat
will chime every hour, remind and repeat

I sit in the dark, and hear every creak
And the heart of a house has fallen asleep.

I fondle the arms, of a chair from the past
Like something remembered, with moments to last
My chair is a remnant from yesterday's child
Restored and now cherished to bring me a smile

It keeps me in rhythm, this midnight in June
I think how she rocked me, to lullabye tunes

She sat in the dark, under a soft velvet moon
With me in her arms, I can picture the room
I can't quite recall, but the moment is charmed
I was held to her breast in soft velvet arms

The rocking of rails, against the hardness of floor
Returns all my thoughts, to reflect on once more
The rhythm the same....there is gold on the grain
There is gold from the past and gold on the glass
The moon watched time pass, through an old window pane




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6/13/14 
For The Contest "Midnight Hour" sponsored by Kelly Deschler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Carrie, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:08 PM
a wonderful win, SKAT
Roper Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful description of the sounds and color of the room and the rocking chair. 7
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:28 PM
A delight to read Carrie - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 12:36 PM
This wonderful poem has been lingering in my memory every since my "Midnight Hour" contest, and I'm sure it will stay there for a long, long time. Congrats on your first place win and thank you for participating, Carrie!
Devonshire Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 10:49 PM
Dear Carrie, I knew this amazing poem would place high. Congrats on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
Nance Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 6:36 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win, woohoo you rock!
Lawless Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Carrie, the idea of listening to the old house, room, and rocking chair and drifting back in memory with the midnight moon as emcee. Congrats, well deserved.
Deschler Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Wow! This was a beautiful recalling of the memories of a lifetime that took place in this chair. I loved the nostalgic feel of this wonderful poem, Carrie! Great rhyme and word flow in this, as well. Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!
Gibson Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Carrie, so lovely. I love reading your work; every one creates a spell. I think we will see this again at the top of a list. Thanks for your visit.
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 3:39 PM
wow, this is utterly beautiful, Carrie. I would place it way up at the top of that winners' list!!
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:21 AM
I agree with Carolyn's comments below - absolutely beautiful, my friend
Devonshire Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Dear Carrie, This is the best poem I've read so far for the contest. Only you can create images that are meaningful to a message in this manner. Those "soft, velvet hands" must have been your mother's or grandmother's. Love the way the poem creates such a serene mood. Best wishes in Kelly's challenge. Love, Carolyn
Nance Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Whoa, Wonderful. I bought a wooden rocking chair when my baby was born, the memories of rocking her will always be cherished and it seems yours are as well. What a great poem, big smiles :)
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