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Midnight Feast

With night vision eyes
she held her supper in sight
as she stooped unheard

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/27/2008 3:52:00 PM

Umm Duh! Just read this again. Read it totally different the first time. Musta had a bit too much "holiday cheer" before I read it.(LOL) Don't worry, you'll get use to it, I am known to be a bit ditsy at times. A nice balance of a little bit looney and mostly harmless! Love Robin

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/27/2008 12:40:00 PM

Talk about hot. This creates...Visions. Very good. Glad you liked the alliteration. Thought it would be fun to post. Happy Thanksgiving to you too. Love Robin

Date: 11/12/2008 4:22:00 PM

Interesting use of this short format to share your thoughts. The last line is my favorite. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Torres

Date: 11/2/2008 5:51:00 PM

Excitement here Nigel. You always captivate. God bless you Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/2/2008 6:23:00 AM

I think you were up late last night enjoying and observing well nocturnal creatures and nature. Your haiku is once again quite full of imagery. A bit creepy this one, but love it. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/2/2008 6:00:00 AM

A wonderful write Nigel. Night vision eyes, very powerful. Thank you for your welcome comments on my work.

John Heck

Date: 11/2/2008 1:30:00 AM

The first poem I've read by you - and a haiku...quite eerie and inviting and brilliantly penned. Love the brooding overtone..."she stooped unheard"...excellent! Peace always, John

Midnight Feast

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