Midnight Fantasy

As I relax between the earth and the moon
My feet resting upon a star
I enjoy my midnight fantasy
In the realm where dreams are formed  

Adorned in stately nightwear
Eyelids closed in slumber deep 
 I sit watching someone's comet go by 
It's tail lightly touching my cheek

 The earth and moon revolve around Me
In these moments so serene
Sunlight casting ghostly shadows
of me relaxing in between 
Disappearing briefly
As the earth and moon pass by

But when the morning comes
And daylight pulls me from my sleep
I will retain this midnight fantasy
Because it's one I wish to keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/26/2017 6:57:00 PM
Hello Edward, this fantasy is not mine but if it were I would want to keep it. Wow! This is such a different poem.
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Date: 4/26/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene and please feel free to enjoy it as often as you like. Thank you again.
Date: 4/26/2017 8:17:00 AM
This is a nice , relaxing poem Edward. Well done :)
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for the well done.
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