Midnight Delight, Second Version

MIDNIGHT DELIGHT (SECOND VERSION)

When the moon is young and full
We gaze and count the stars above
Every glimpse and twinkle
Meant another promise
Every time I hold back my breath
It would seem new life is making alive
To redeem the fall of yesteryears
This time, I wish I wouldn’t wake and this come true
I hold your hands
You hold mine too
Every spell of words are like magic
Till glorious and amorous feeling
Dwell in both of us!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 7:13 PM
gosh, I can't say which I like better. WEll, this one said a few more thing you couldn't say in a haiku. That made it very nice.
Freeman Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 6:14 AM
wonderfully flowing free verse, Dalila. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Delighted to see you posted here today Dalila. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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