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Midnight Cosmic Embrace

Written: September 16, 2023
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In the dilatory embrace of midnight dance,
Amid gloom and shadows, we bore a chance.
Akin to a pyre of passion, the tango did ignite,
As our souls entwined, an epic cosmic sight.

Crestfallen souls sought solace in rhythm dance. 
Two forfeited souls decry their trance.
In the nebulous world of dreams,
Our love gleamed through moonbeams. 

We wandered the night with each diaphanous stride.
Mist In a desultory ritual, we waltz by side and pride. 
The midnight hour whispered secrets untold,
As the magic of the moment began to unfold. 

Inveigled by the enchantment of the night,
Our bodies moved in wanton delight. 
A collocation of our bodies, a harmonious blend,
Creating a symphony only love could intend.

In the inane ails of the world, we decry respite,
As the rhythm of the tango set our spirits alight.
But amid canorous sound and shimmering stars,
A chimera of doubt cast its shadowy scars. 

Inhale life into our dance, we dared to believe,
Our passion is beyond what they perceive.
Akin to gossamer threads, delicate and fine,
Our love drew words across the cosmos, divine 

The ruling of a raw sun born from our embrace,
Beshrew qualms, that love would never efface.
In the clangor of doubts and the caterwaul 
Of skeptics who denigrate, we stood tall. 

Our compassion was the most potent force,
Nurturing us through life's winding course.
With every haul, we scorned the night,
In a dance that shimmered with cosmic light. 

Until the stars start to drip and gleam,
A canvas created, a passion supreme.
Words whispered softly, in the midnight air,
Blaring a love that was beyond compare.

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The Situation September 17, 2023 at 6:17 AM The best I've seen you do. The rhyming makes the difference. Keeps you awake. It's a little bit of work but it's extreamly worth it as a poet.

Valsa George September 17, 2023 at 5:52 AM In the uniterrupted flow of heavenly passions when two lovers dance, who will not be drawn to that celestial scene! Continue that dance until the stars begin to drip. Simply fabulous !

Vijay Pandit September 17, 2023 at 5:40 AM A canvas created, a passion supreme. Words whispered softly, in the midnight air, Blaring a love that was beyond compare---you painted a beautiful dream for love, my friend. I felt the thrill you convey, Lasaad.

Silent One September 17, 2023 at 5:09 AM Great rhymes Sotto, great poetry must be your motto... You always write with so much description, in every poem there is something different, lovely lines with remarkable use of words.. long may your poetry continue to entice many on here... we all seek a love that is beyond compare..

Ink Empress September 17, 2023 at 1:57 AM A cosmic connection and dance that is worth reading about, how soulfully divine is this celestial romance you’ve depicted with such brilliant diction and rhymes that flow in such a seamless cadence. I loved so many lines in this especially your word pairing is so good and unique and lyrical. “ until the stars start to drip and gleam” “love beyond compare. Luv this one my friend! Impeccable

Speaks Volumes September 16, 2023 at 8:58 PM A wonderful poem dear friend. "As our souls entwined, an epic cosmic sight." The imagery is sublime. Cheers SV

Beryl Edmonds September 16, 2023 at 7:19 PM Truly beautiful Sotto, love this “dance that shimmered with cosmic light.” ~ Belle