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Midnight Charmer - Ziket

Flirtatious star above me winks...
out in the dusk



2-LINE POEM - ziket Poetry Contest  (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 
Date written: 08/14/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 3:41 PM
a flirty one!! So cute, Edward, and big congrats for your big win.
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-)
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:26 PM
love that flirtatious star many congrats Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Jan:-)
Watt Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:17 PM
I love the subcontext of the flirtatious star winking at you, Edward. Great write, and congrats on your top placement ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, John:-) Most appreciated.
Lawless Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 11:47 AM
nicely done Edward congrats
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thank you, John:-)
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations for your win :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thank you, Heidi!:-)
Mcgee Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 10:20 AM
I love that first line. wonderful win!
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Jeanne:-)
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Congrats, Edward, on your win in Line's contest with this stellar write! Winkin' away, Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Ooh I like that!!! I wink back ;), Congratulations on your win! xomo
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so much, Pidge! I'm charmed:-)
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