Midnight By Silent Lake

Like razorblades
knowing the difference
Midnight by silent lake 
Flat serene only birds 
Rustling in bushes  
Two eyes in a moonlit sky
Amongst a million stars 
Life peace hope and  
My love,
My honest love for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 3, 2013 at 6:27 PM
Hi Avi Welcome to the Soup. Your poems reach a side of me kept buried.......but I do see the sadness and ugliness out there and you let it know your'e awake up to it....well done. SuZ
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October 17, 2013 at 8:36 PM
hi Avi, i like this free verse poem. very dreamy..... awesome and lovely imagery....SKAT
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October 17, 2013 at 8:44 PM
Your avatar is forever embedded on my synapses with your pink presence time And time again! Thank uuuuuu Best wishes Avi
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