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Midnight Blue

intoxicated by strong eucalyptus scent I swirl in blue mist ------------------------------- A Let the Pens Flow Contest Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/3/2020 6:36:00 PM

I like the smell of Eucalyptus. Very pleasant :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2020 12:43:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Angela. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2019 1:20:00 PM

hope this was a big winner - love it

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2019 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Jack; pleased you like it...the sponsor thought otherwise:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/2/2019 4:47:00 PM

Hello Paul, I like this scene you painted with your words. Regards Darlene.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2019 11:26:00 AM

Pleased that you liked it, Darlene...thank you. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 8:27:00 PM

this is just wonderful. Has this contest been judged yet. I bet this gets a win.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2019 10:26:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I believe it's still being judged. Best regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2019 6:36:00 AM

- I like this much ... beautiful, Paul - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 12:28:00 PM

So pleased you found it to your liking, Anne-Lise :) Thank you! Hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/13/2019 6:05:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi. Pleased to have you back after your hiatus. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/12/2019 10:45:00 AM

I’m enchanted by the lovely spirit of your heady imagery, Paul. Your potent poetic pen knows no bounds, my talented friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes and hugs for you always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 12:26:00 PM

Your lovely and encouraging comments are always a delight to read, Susan...same applies to your poetry, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/10/2019 10:37:00 PM

Oh wow Paul this was quite beautiful and with so few words you still moved me! Lovely Paul simply lovely!;)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 12:01:00 PM

You are too kind, Brenda...thank you:) Hope you've been enjoying the weekend. Hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 6/9/2019 3:33:00 PM

beautiful and serene verse, Paul, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 11:55:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. So pleased you enjoyed it. Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/9/2019 1:24:00 PM

Such a beautiful haiku, Paul! You certainly have the special skills for this type of poetry. Wishing you success in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for the generous comments, Carolyn. Excuse the late reply, but I've been busy, as you know. Love // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 6/9/2019 1:01:00 PM

I see it’s not just my bumblebee that is swirling! Ha ha! I hope you two don’t run into each other.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, Edlynn...having already experienced your 'bumblebee' I read your comments with a big smile:) Best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/9/2019 11:50:00 AM

Oh wow the intoxicating pungent smell of eucalyptus oil - no wonder it drives you to popular Shisha, where you swirl in blue mist with a wonderful blueberry flavour. I know all your poems have a message - well penned my dear friend Paul, Warm wishes and hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/16/2019 11:23:00 AM

You have delved to the core of my poem and delivered an insightful feedback, Jenny! In some countries shisha is very popular, though undoubtedly not at all healthy. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/8/2019 8:29:00 PM

oooh, this is lovely Paul! I am sure she will appreciate it. We have eucalyptus trees near our home and they do have a lovely scent. : ) xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 6/9/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you...I am pleased you enjoyed it, Connie. I love the scent of eucalyptus...maybe I should have been a koala bear:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/8/2019 5:58:00 PM

You captured the moment perfectly, Paul! Beautiful haiku! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/9/2019 7:11:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. A pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/8/2019 9:17:00 AM

Very nice Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/9/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/8/2019 8:36:00 AM

Lovely, Paul. Delightful. I smell it too.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Line. Enjoy the weekend. // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2019 7:25:00 AM

Beautiful - a winner!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! Your comment and faith in my humble poem are both appreciated. I see that our contest entries are both based on plants - honeysuckle & eucalyptus! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/8/2019 7:21:00 AM

Your poem splendidly evokes the images..well written, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. Pleased you enjoyed. Regards // paul