Middle Age

As my brave abdomen is distended
pleasure in seeing my feet has ended.

4/6/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wood Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:56 AM
hehe, You too? ROFL
Murray Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Too familiar to many to count?
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:38 AM
LOL! Lot said in two funny lines!
Gondolf Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Dale, I got a good chuckle out of this. It's been a while since I was able to see my feet...I guess that makes me old... John
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:43 PM
haha. So when did the epigrams contest close? Congrats to you. Dang, I guess I did not win in that one!!!
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations on your delightful epigram! Good one.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:15 PM
LOL! Nice one!
Callus Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Very humorous, Dale. Middle age is capable of delivering quite a few surprises. Congrats on your win. // paul
Cozart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Thanks for reading, Paul.
Haight Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Ha Ha, love it, Dale! Congrats on your placement on this short list! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Thanks, Sandra, it was fun to write.
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Dale. Well done.
Cozart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Dropping back for a third time to say many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thanks, Jan!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Lol! So sharp it hurts ;) Congratulations! xomo
Cozart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thanks a lot, Maureen.
Adams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Ha! This is really funny! Good one Dale!.........80)
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 1:50 PM
dropping back again cos i needed to read it again for another giggle:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:05 PM
haha, VERY clever!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Good one, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks much, Kim.
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Awesome epigram. Beautifully done, Dale. More sad than funny as I can relate all too well.
Cozart Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Thanks very much, Line.
Anish Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Funny ode! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Cozart Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Thank you, Matthew.
Ashley Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Haha! I love it Dale. Awesome and very witty!
Cozart Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 4:39 PM
ha ha ha that is hilarious Dale!:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Thanks, Jan. I'm glad you liked it.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace