Middaydream

Just tell me how I got this far
Just tell me why you're here and who you are
                        
                       -Michelle Branch, Everywhere



Beset by all kinds of thoughts or so while I try
To picture you. Thus, something not sacramental
Instead, a ritual: eyes closed, (for good measure)
So as to assemble you and you alone 
Who comes out of my mind's shadow barely a minute old:
Far and whose form a blur
Weightless like air next to the noonday sun
(Or perchance a bit of both) Of which I'm certain.
What if I fall asleep
Atop your facelessness forever and of such is not enough?Worse,
If there exists, I might dream
Nothing,
No thing.




Author's Inspiration:
Everywhere
Sung by Michelle Branch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/25/2008 11:56:00 PM
Hey you...wanted to wish you and your loved one's a Merry Christmas and a Happy Holiday AND a blessed New Year,,,you are now added to my favorite poets list...why?...because you write brilliantly! You're a talented man/poet. Peace and happiness always, John
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:09:00 PM
Dear Gino - Another beautiful and inspired write! Wishing you and your loved ones a Happy & Blessed Holiday season! Hoping all is well. Peace and happiness, John
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Date: 12/3/2008 5:47:00 AM
Then do not fall asleep! Ah, to daydream. To have someone to daydream about! Outstanding and dreamy write! Love it! Love, Shar
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