Midday Siesta

This lovely Haiku just makes you want to sigh Farah, it's does indeed read so peaceful. Thanks kindly for your lovely comment :)

peaceful haiku! Farah, jim

Ahhhh! sweet tranquility of body and mind. I.N.

Enjoyed running across this haiku again. So much serenity in your words. Thank you for this day brightener! Karen

I can picture the scenery here, reminds me much of Canada. There was hill where I used to lie down on and watch the clouds and the sun. I used name the clouds according on what they look like. You brought back memories, and I thank you. Beautiful write.

Sounds like a pleasant way to spend part of the day. This poem has a serene feel, fitting with your words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen

Oh my...does that sound nice! ~ Carrie

Pleasant haiku, Young One. Vince

Lovely and enchanting....makes me want to go to the grass and watch the clouds, but it's freezing, lol! Best wishes, Sara:)

This flows so beautifully! Lovely imagery and word choices... Well done Farah!! Best wishes, Keith

Sounds wonderful, I could go for that right now. Love the form and flow of your words. Michael

this brings to mind pleasant memories, gentile and peaceful write, take care D-nyce

Oh how I wish I could doze off now just like this. Lovely. Michael

Lovely scene you've painted with words...Raul

hello my friend :)...i've been more busy studying than writing as of late,but it is always nice to catch your posts...i'm sure after a nice afternoon ride on your bike,it's nice to lay back in the grass and relax huh ?!!.....i do that alot,so this post of yours,encouraged me to post a shorty poem,of my veiw and perspective...."wahi dud din ",and may you keep such a lovely heart dear Farah...always , jay

I don't buy this at all, Farah, The Young One. A young girl like you does not need any siesta at all, you should be playing 'hide and seek' out in the sun. Hey, it's old and ancient men like Sean and me who need lots of rest and sleep! LOL The Young Once

Excellent haiku , TYone , in perfect format ....Now , I feel like a snooze ..zzzzzzzzzz ....

A peaceful write here, Farah, just lovely. oh how i long for the grass!love, Kristin :)

That is a beautifully written Haiku young one..I wish the sun would make an appearance soon and stay a while...great write.

Farah, this is just a bit too good. Extremely peaceful and soothing, but I am trying to wake up here! Lovely! Love, Shar

Nice haiku farah. This poem projects peaceful feelings. I love nature and chilling out like this but especailly love to gaze the stars :) Weather permits of course...