Mid-August Rains...

Soothing from the scorching mid-summer day
winded clouds bring much needed August rain
steam rises from its touch as puddles to drain
absorbed by below quenching thirst as in May...

Basking in showers face raised recieve
most welcomed relief heat lifted release
Sun smiles between raindrops as if in tease
smiling below from those whom believe...

Comforting moisture the water of life
sharing goodness which stream varied currents
delightful pleasures being shared in torrents
as love is true gift shared by husband and wife...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 22, 2008 at 8:10 AM
the visual picture this work brings is wonderful; great imagery! I like how you closed it also, very sweet. I like it so much I am putting it as a favorite.
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