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Andrea's Best Haiku Contest ~ 5/9/25

painting by Lin Lane


mid summer hatchlings
tadpoles in a cattail pond ~
feast for an egret

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:48:00 PM

I completely forgot who wrote this one too! And now I am noticing your beautiful artwork. Congrats on my contest, Lin.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2024 12:28:00 PM

What a cool hike, Lin.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/26/2024 3:43:00 PM

Nice wording!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/27/2024 10:47:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Kim.

Paul Willason

Date: 4/26/2024 6:06:00 AM

Haiku magic my dear Lin....given a visual presence by your painting. Do hope a few tadpoles escaped to become frogs.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/27/2024 10:47:00 AM

Hi, Paul and thank you for commenting on my poetry and painting. The tadpoles filled this egret and he didn't spread the word to his friends about the banquet. lol

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/26/2024 3:17:00 AM

Lin, love the painting and haiku, both wonderful! -hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 4/26/2024 4:20:00 AM

Morning, Tania and thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/25/2024 12:47:00 PM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your creative Haiku write. What a great painting. So much talent in one person. Great Job On Both... Hope you are OK & having a wonderful springtime... Have a blessed day writing away................

Lin Lane
Date: 4/25/2024 6:36:00 PM

Paula, your comments always make me smile so I thank you for recognizing my poetry and paintings.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/25/2024 9:53:00 AM

Dearest Lin, I loved how your haiku delicately captures the life cycle in nature's symphony. It's a wonderful glimpse into the intricate balance of predator and prey, where even the smallest creatures play their part. I also like how your words evoke a sense of harmony and interconnectedness of the beauty and brutality inherent in the natural world. - Blessings, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 4/25/2024 10:05:00 AM

'Thank you' is never enough written in two words to give credit to the honor you offer my poetry. The great amount of detail you go into is truly appreciated, Daniel.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/25/2024 9:49:00 AM

Simply too much talent for one person, Lin. Cute poem, gorgeous painting.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/25/2024 10:04:00 AM

Dear Danny, I don't know about talent, but I try to paint what my eyes envision, and write what comes from that. There are many egrets in my area. Thanks a bunch, sweet friend.