Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Mid Night Party

Mid night party gone
                                    all are silent and tired now
                                            needs relaxation

                                       feels distance of home
                                      driving car under control
                                     watchman opens the gate 

                                           body's no control
                            tongue keeps silence, eyelids close
                                         on own bed rest on

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2011 at 3:12 PM unique sequence of party events leading to needed bed rest..luv the image filled descriptions of the tongue and eyelids bl..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2011 at 7:25 PM Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today BL. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley September 23, 2011 at 6:39 PM Hi bl, Party on my friend, being tired is no excuse - just kidding, You make a bed feel good after an eve of revelling.