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Mid Night Party

Mid night party gone all are silent and tired now needs relaxation feels distance of home driving car under control watchman opens the gate body's no control tongue keeps silence, eyelids close on own bed rest on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/26/2011 3:12:00 PM
unique sequence of party events leading to needed bed rest..luv the image filled descriptions of the tongue and eyelids bl..
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:25:00 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today BL. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:39:00 PM
Hi bl, Party on my friend, being tired is no excuse - just kidding, You make a bed feel good after an eve of revelling.
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