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Mid Night

i saw a nightmare, in the mid night. I saw a girl,  in this mid night. In this mid night, a light blink down. a open window, to show off look down. the clouds are cotton, and the moon is bead. if we weave, being a dress disbelieve. There's one thing, I have to tell you. I can't stop uttering, anything about you. my night mare, is a beautiful dream. the girl who wears my, cloud moon dree'. there's one thing I want to tell you. I can't stop saying, anything about you. I wanna say you a to b, But one thing be you. i dont like c, the midnight gone. the morning come, the night mare ends. the girl is gone

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Date: 9/3/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/8/2017 9:48:00 PM
A good poem overwhelmed with feelings. Congratulations meena. It would have been better had you corrected some grammatical errors. After all it's a nice poem. I liked it. Madan Mohan
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