Joanna Daniel Poet Pantoum

Mickey Plays Basketball

Mickey playing basketball jumps up high!
Ball in the basket, twenty points are scored,
Minnie cheers from the stands, “Yippee! Bull’s eye!”
There he is winning, the one she adored,

Ball in the basket, twenty points are scored,
One after another, keeps shooting them,
There he is winning, the one she adored,
Minnie is all smiles, her Mickey’s a gem,

One after another, keeps shooting them,
Minnie cheers from the stands, “Yippee! Bull’s eye!”
Minnie is all smiles, her Mickey’s a gem,
Mickey playing basketball jumps up high!


07.21.2021


10 syllables per line 
Photo #1

For Eve Roper's "Pantoum Rhyme 1" contest

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Sam Kauffman August 17, 2021 at 10:33 AM High flying fun Jo! Well done. Congratulations to you and Mickey!

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 16, 2021 at 2:37 PM Hilarious! These poems are fun! Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy August 16, 2021 at 1:43 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Jo. Janice

Paula Goldsmith August 16, 2021 at 1:34 PM Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. "Mickey Plays Basketball" gave his gal Minnie many smiles. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Christuraj Alex August 16, 2021 at 9:15 AM Wonderful Interpretation. Very vivid details. Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 8:33 PM Jo, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. August 2, 2021 at 9:23 PM WoW! Jo, I really enjoyed your interpretation of the photo. You did a great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 26, 2021 at 6:57 AM A cute sweet pantoum in superb rhyming. You brought them to life yay! Kudos! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^------ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem .

Quoth Theraven July 25, 2021 at 9:32 PM Looks like you had fun writing this Jo. Showed such fine creative side in your Pantoum. I think this contest is going to get interesting. Good luck Mickey & Jo! -Richard

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2021 at 4:29 PM very cute one, JO!

Rama Balasubramanian July 22, 2021 at 7:52 AM Superb! Really liked the way you wrote it. All the best for contest. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments

Mike Bayles July 22, 2021 at 7:06 AM Very nice pantoum. I like the pattern of lines.

Tom Cunningham July 21, 2021 at 10:45 AM Love your interpretation of the picture Jo, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Regina Mcintosh July 21, 2021 at 8:51 AM Wonderful write. I love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2021 at 6:00 AM Nice!

Chris Green July 21, 2021 at 5:54 AM This was fun my friend. brought a smile to my face. Best wishes in the contest

Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 5:15 AM You captured the photo in your poem beautifully, Jo--all the best.

Victor Buhagiar July 21, 2021 at 1:24 AM A clever way of writing a pantoum. Lovely way of cheering Mickey Mouse. He'll win the game and you will win the contest. Best for a win. Hugs.