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Mickey Plays Basketball

Mickey playing basketball jumps up high! Ball in the basket, twenty points are scored, Minnie cheers from the stands, “Yippee! Bull’s eye!” There he is winning, the one she adored, Ball in the basket, twenty points are scored, One after another, keeps shooting them, There he is winning, the one she adored, Minnie is all smiles, her Mickey’s a gem, One after another, keeps shooting them, Minnie cheers from the stands, “Yippee! Bull’s eye!” Minnie is all smiles, her Mickey’s a gem, Mickey playing basketball jumps up high! 07.21.2021 10 syllables per line Photo #1 For Eve Roper's "Pantoum Rhyme 1" contest

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Date: 8/17/2021 10:33:00 AM
High flying fun Jo! Well done. Congratulations to you and Mickey!
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Date: 8/16/2021 2:37:00 PM
Hilarious! These poems are fun! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:43:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Jo. Janice
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. "Mickey Plays Basketball" gave his gal Minnie many smiles. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:15:00 AM
Wonderful Interpretation. Very vivid details. Great Work. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:33:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/2/2021 9:23:00 PM
WoW! Jo, I really enjoyed your interpretation of the photo. You did a great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:57:00 AM
A cute sweet pantoum in superb rhyming. You brought them to life yay! Kudos! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^------ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem .
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:32:00 PM
Looks like you had fun writing this Jo. Showed such fine creative side in your Pantoum. I think this contest is going to get interesting. Good luck Mickey & Jo! -Richard
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Date: 7/22/2021 4:29:00 PM
very cute one, JO!
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Date: 7/22/2021 7:52:00 AM
Superb! Really liked the way you wrote it. All the best for contest. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments
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Date: 7/22/2021 7:06:00 AM
Very nice pantoum. I like the pattern of lines.
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Date: 7/21/2021 10:45:00 AM
Love your interpretation of the picture Jo, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 7/21/2021 8:51:00 AM
Wonderful write. I love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:00:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:54:00 AM
This was fun my friend. brought a smile to my face. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:15:00 AM
You captured the photo in your poem beautifully, Jo--all the best.
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:24:00 AM
A clever way of writing a pantoum. Lovely way of cheering Mickey Mouse. He'll win the game and you will win the contest. Best for a win. Hugs.
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