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Mickey Mouse Made a Slam-Dunk

Mickey ran and jumped and made a slam-dunk
Minnie Mouse, Donald, and Daisy Duck cheer
Double dribbling on Pepé Le Pew the skunk
He lost the ball to other team was clear 

Minnie Mouse, Donald, and Daisy Duck cheer 
Mickey dribbling fast put it through his legs
He lost the ball to other team was clear
In hushed prayer he kneels on his forelegs

Mickey dribbling fast put it through his legs
Double dribbling on Pepé Le Pew the skunk 
In hush prayer he kneels on his forelegs
Mickey ran and jumped and made a slam-dunk




7/15/2021
Pantoum Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Hurray for Mickey - i played basket ball for the Hellenic Team - way back in the year dot! Nice one Eve, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:15 AM
A delightful Mickey Mouse Pantoum Eve, and a great example for the contest… Belle
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Delightful! All the best for contest
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thank you , Rama, it is the example for my contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Adorable. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Example poem, Regina. I am glad you liked it.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:23 PM
A lovely pantoum. I was cheering them all.
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:26 AM
I am glad you like, used for example :)
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