Alexis Y. Poet Pantoum

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Mickey Loves B Ball

Mickey plays basketball in his free time,
He has a very cool slam dunk as well.
When he is shooting hoops, he feels sublime.
As Minnie watched him play, her heart would swell.

He has a very cool slam dunk as well,
Him and his gang would play ball on weekends.
As Minnie watched him play, her heart would swell,
He enjoys hanging out with his best friends.

Him and his gang would play ball on weekends,
When he is shooting hoops, he feels sublime. 
He enjoys hanging out with his best friends,
Mickey plays basketball in his free time.






07-26-2021
Contest: Pantoum Rhyme 1
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2021 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I want Mickey on my team. Go Team. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Sam Kauffman August 17, 2021 at 10:43 AM This is a definitely a "slam dunk" and three point shot Alexis. Congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex August 16, 2021 at 9:20 AM Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 8:39 PM Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Alexis Y. August 14, 2021 at 12:42 PM Hi Eve, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos July 30, 2021 at 10:10 AM Hi Alexis, Very Cute, Mickey Mouse is my hero, such a cartoon sweetheart - best wishes for a win my dear friend. hugs and blessing Jenny.

Joanna Daniel July 29, 2021 at 1:30 AM Fun write, Alexis, I chose the same picture too:) Alexis Y. August 2, 2021 at 9:18 PM Hi Jo, Thank you very much. You did? Off to read yours now:-)Alexis

Rico Leffanta July 27, 2021 at 12:02 PM The USA could have used Mickey in Tokyo! Alexis Y. July 27, 2021 at 12:37 PM Lol! Rico, They sure could have. I appreciate that you stopped by today:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2021 at 11:07 AM - I'm sure Minnie is proud of Mickey ... I do not understand why they never got married ... :))) - Best wishes in the contest with this lovely poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian July 27, 2021 at 3:57 AM Delightful write! All the best for contest

Tom Cunningham July 27, 2021 at 1:25 AM Love your interpretation of the picture Alexis, If I was playing I'd need stilts lol. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar July 26, 2021 at 10:16 PM A delightful pantoum, Alexia. Best for a win.

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 26, 2021 at 4:12 PM This is a fantastic pantoum, Alexis. It is a wonderful contest entry. Good luck! Blessings, Evelyn :)

Mystic Rose Rose July 26, 2021 at 3:40 PM I loved loved Mickey, still have a ceramic one in my house from when I went on my honey moon 43 years ago, lol, its an antique now. Much loved your poem dear Alexis xo

Jan Allison July 26, 2021 at 2:40 PM what a sweet fun poem Alexis:-) good luck in the contest:-) hug Jan xx

Vijay Pandit July 26, 2021 at 2:27 PM Nicely spun, Alexis, in this hard to execute form. All the best.

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2021 at 2:13 PM Way to go for the contest. I enjoyed this one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara