Home » Poems » Raul Moreno » Michelangelo's Creation

Michelangelo's Creation

His Edged Chisel Chiseled The contours from stone. David, the King of Israel. ______________________________ *for Brian’s SEQUENCE Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/21/2009 11:27:00 PM

Amazing as always Raul! Hey check your mail. Nate

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:13:00 AM

His apt words chiseled minds ... Raul, a king among poets.

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/19/2009 8:30:00 PM

Beautiful write master! Eduardo

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/19/2009 4:59:00 PM

Dear Raul Magnificent Fibonacci GoodLuck in the Contest ALWAYS...HG Raul, You haven't been Tagged Yet I am Quite surprised This Tag Game is great Family Fun ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 6:46:00 AM

Combination Fibonacci/Ekphrasis! You are so brilliant! Good luck! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/18/2009 11:48:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Raul Rgds Brian

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:24:00 PM

Beautiful creation yours and Michelangelo;s. Good luck in the contest. Love E.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 5/18/2009 10:00:00 PM

a fabulous spiritually uplifting piece in tribute to an awesome artist,,Good Luck in the contest and Thank you so very much for all the visits and comments that you left behind upon my poems,,,blessings..Cecil

Date: 5/18/2009 4:37:00 PM

Much for the reader to think about in this poem. I like the repetition in the third and fourth lines. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/18/2009 3:54:00 PM

David was one of my favorite characters in the bible, he was gentle and at the same time ruthless. But at the end of the day he was man after God's heart.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/18/2009 3:45:00 PM

You are consistantly wonderful. BG

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/18/2009 1:44:00 PM

Great imagery my friend and on such a beautiful sculpture. Truly magnificent. Smiles from Lolita

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/18/2009 1:42:00 PM

I like the imagery, When i read it i seem to be their watch the great one do the chiseling! great work!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/18/2009 1:37:00 PM

You are the man my friend.. wonderful and best wishes with the contest.