Michelangelo's Creation

His 
Edged 
Chisel
Chiseled
The contours from stone.
David, the King of Israel.  



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Leccese Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Amazing as always Raul! Hey check your mail. Nate
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:13 AM
His apt words chiseled minds ... Raul, a king among poets.
Orozco Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Beautiful write master! Eduardo
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May 19, 2009 at 4:59 PM
Dear Raul Magnificent Fibonacci GoodLuck in the Contest ALWAYS...HG Raul, You haven't been Tagged Yet I am Quite surprised This Tag Game is great Family Fun ALWAYS...HG
Winter Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Combination Fibonacci/Ekphrasis! You are so brilliant! Good luck! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Raul Rgds Brian
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:24 PM
Beautiful creation yours and Michelangelo;s. Good luck in the contest. Love E.
Hickman Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 10:00 PM
a fabulous spiritually uplifting piece in tribute to an awesome artist,,Good Luck in the contest and Thank you so very much for all the visits and comments that you left behind upon my poems,,,blessings..Cecil
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May 18, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Much for the reader to think about in this poem. I like the repetition in the third and fourth lines. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
Lopez Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:54 PM
David was one of my favorite characters in the bible, he was gentle and at the same time ruthless. But at the end of the day he was man after God's heart.
Gorelick Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:45 PM
You are consistantly wonderful. BG
Townsend Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Great imagery my friend and on such a beautiful sculpture. Truly magnificent. Smiles from Lolita
Hensley Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:42 PM
I like the imagery, When i read it i seem to be their watch the great one do the chiseling! great work!
Higgins Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:37 PM
You are the man my friend.. wonderful and best wishes with the contest.
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