Michaelangelo Vs Da Vinci

It’s said the great Michaelangelo
had considered himself as a foe
to a rival of his.
You should know who this is -
Da Vinci, the great Leonardo!

So why would the one so dislike
the other? I bet as a tyke
Michaelangelo would
tell his foe, if he could:
“You’re a dreamer, so go take a hike!”

Yes, a dreamer was popular Leo,
and he did all his artwork so slow.
he’d finish so little
that here is the riddle:
Why did everyone like that guy so?

While Michael was giving his all,
Leo faltered and then he would stall.
A mural he tried,
changed the paint and got fried.
The guy could not finish a wall!

Michaelangelo worked like a slave.
To the world a great chapel he gave.
While Da Vinci would play
with his rich friends all day,
Michael worked himself into the grave!


For Marugu Mo's Contest: Historical rivalry-Part 1- Leonardo vs Michaelangelo
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Bangalee Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 10:54 PM
wow greatly penned the historical rivalry in limerick form ///
Gasun Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Wow! These are all amazing! So love it and enjoyed! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win my dear friend, Andrea! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 8:46 AM
I can visualize the boxing gloves...lol! Congrats on your top spot, Andrea!
Lawless Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Very ingenious take on the form and style of the two "foes" Leonardo wants to know how long it took you.....hehehe Congrats on the top spot
Daniel Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Great set of limericks, Andrea:) I didn't try this one...you have researched well as the result shows:) congratulations on your top win:)
Rycroft Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Well done x very well studied x 1st congrats great work x
Scars Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 7:20 AM
lol! love this Andrea! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Austin Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Here's a bunch I missed. You can spin these limericks off so great and I have trouble writing just one. Flash! I didn't know this about Leonardo. Love, daver
Walker Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Very very clever.
Horne Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 3:30 PM
ha ha, wonderful set of limericks
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:46 AM
An interesting perspective. This was one contest I couldn't get my mind around. You did well.
Vaso Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:03 PM
This is very good! Very creative, loved this one! Hugs!
Cadet Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Agreed -- so very creative. W
Salehi Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Pretty CLEVER... Good Luck...
Godwin Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:52 AM
OUTSTANDING - so clever. From me, my friend a: WOW ... CayCay
Warrior Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Beautifully done my friend...just like two brothers growing up in Italy lol...god bless and good luck...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Oh I love that last stanza, Andrea, very good. I didn't even think to write anything about this, I should have but the muse is in hiding. Good luck in the contest :)
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:29 PM
This is an interesting one Andrea. Almost like a lyric in limerick rhyme. They both fascinate me.
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