Michael Jackson Gone Too Soon (Seventh Heaven)

“Heal The World” like in Heaven A “Thriller” many believed he was too “Bad” The King of Pops “Black or White” Seven times he cried—“The Way You Make Me Feel” Then he “Eased on Down the Road” Singing: “Earth Songs” like “Beat It,” “Leave Me Alone” Now “Ben,”—he is “Gone Too Soon!” ~~~~~~~***~~~~~~~ © Joseph Spence, Sr., 6/28/09 © All Rights Reserved ~~~~~~~***~~~~~~~ The form is 7/11/7/11/7/11/7. The total syllable count is 61. The first line has seven syllables, second eleven, third seven, fourth eleven, fifth seven, sixth eleven, and seventh seven. Rhyming is optional; however, it’s a plus. Any variation of the words “seven” or “heaven” must appear in the poem. Invented by Joseph Spence, Sr., 2007. ~~~~~~~***~~~~~~~ Joseph S. Spence, Sr., is the author of "The Awakened One Poetics" (2009), which is published in seven different languages. He invented the Epulaeryu poetry form, which focuses on succulent cuisines and drinks. He is published in various forums, including the World Haiku Association; Poetinis Druskininku, Milwaukee Area College, Phoenix Magazine; Möbius Poetry, and Taj Mahal Review to name a few. Joseph is a Goodwill Ambassador for the state of Arkansas, USA, a college faculty, and a military veteran.
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Oba Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Fascinating poem, Joseph. I really love the style, and to know you're the inventor, then you must be really talented in creativity. Thanks! I'm glad you liked the style in my Jackson poem titled "Death of an Immortal."
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July 21, 2009 at 1:20 PM
WOAHH!! Cool! i LOVE that! lol! You used some of the ''Michael Jackson'' songs to form a Cool paragraph! I'm 11 years old, and i'm new here,and your poem is COOOOOL! X's and O's! - Amber
Morris Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:54 PM
great tribute to The King of Pop.
Peranteau Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 1:39 AM
Yes,..you lumped mine throat with this one Mr. Spence. A true artist,..cut from a cloth we all would thank Jehovah for ! TY for this sad, yet soothing poem! james
Freakasso Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 11:16 PM
Dear Joseph, Real Tangy and piquant, you really get to the point. keep it up. regards prince freakasso
Augustus Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 2:26 PM
This is an awesome tribute to Michael Jackson! Very creative poem about such a sudden tragedy.
Jackson Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 6:54 PM
awe....so very sad...Michael was a very sad man........I wanted to thank you for your kind comments on my poems...
Christian Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 5:25 AM
a beautiful tribute, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane
Coet Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:15 PM
An excellent "tribute" poem. -ED-
O'Hare Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:45 AM
thank you for comment on my humble poem ,strong emotions can create inspiration i guess ,i like your works to liza x
Duhart Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Excellent write and so muc h truth. thank you for commenting on my work also.
Buys Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 7:07 AM
So very cleverly done and so very creative. That's the Joseph I know and respect, lol. Good work. Love Heidie
Eggins Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:40 AM
I am slowly making my way round poetrysoup but there are so many wonderful writers here but slowly I make inroads lol ... I loved this tribute fitting in every way ... rest in peace MJ ... Love Jayne x x Btw your very clever I loved the idea and your invention is amazing makes me want to try but not yet till I am good enough lol
Jordan Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Hi Joseph - It seems like it has been forever since we crossed paths - I will tackle this form - excellent poem Joseph - My best wishes go out to you and your family - I hope you had a happy forth - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Joseph, thank you for writing and sharing. Looks like I have another form by you to try. I tried to fix up my Chili Chicken one. Think I finally did it. Love, Carol
Freakasso Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Dear Joesph, I thank you for your message so prompt, I found it oozing with oodles of warmth. Hoping to get from you many more, I'll always keep an unlocked door. I enjoyed reading your poems also. do keep writing. Warm regards Prince Freakasso
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 3:50 AM
Spence, Nice invention. And the poem is wonderful, too.
Strand Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 12:43 AM
Very inventive writing Joseph.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Goff Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 7:29 PM
very creative, Joseph! jim
Neshat Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 6:12 PM
I like it. RIP Michael Joseph Jackson.
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 5:32 PM
Amazing job....following a difficult form, and including the music of this talented man...not an easy task!! I will have to try this form!
Devonshire Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 5:14 PM
What a clever new verse form. Like the way you worked in the titles of so many great Jackson songs. Lots of folks seem to forget "Ben," but it was my favorite. Masterfully creative, Joseph! Love, Carolyn
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