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Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson Modern day Peter Pan A child forever, in Neverland Even Tinker Bell became a Moonwalk fan Written on 5/28/2015

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2015 1:44:00 AM
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cute last line on Tinker Bell. yes, he was sure a Peter Pan and he never got to grow old!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/30/2015 12:45:00 AM
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A fantastic clerihew in mem'ry of one of my faves, my dear friend, Laura! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/29/2015 3:41:00 PM
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Great Clerihew, Laura. You captured him...Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 8:07:00 AM
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This is a fun one!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM
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Thanks, Richard! I appreciate the kind comment and am glad you liked it :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/29/2015 3:47:00 AM
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love the last line, laura.. very engaging.. haven;t done one yet.. is this for the contest?.. best winning wishes.. huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM
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Thank you, Nette, and yes, there is a clerihew contest right now. This is my first time at this poetry form, as well.
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 5/29/2015 1:13:00 AM
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A well-worded poem. Kudos! 7+
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:19:00 AM
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Thank you, Hannington, for the kind comment and rating, too! :)
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/28/2015 2:22:00 PM
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Good and GOOD LUCK in the contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:23:00 PM
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Thanks, Judy :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:19:00 PM
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I decided to change the last line, as I notice most Clerihew poems have a set rhyme. This is my first attempt at a Clerihew...am still learning :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 2:07:00 PM
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very clever write laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Skat A
Date: 5/28/2015 1:18:00 PM
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cool good luck in contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:12:00 PM
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Thanks, Skat :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2015 1:06:00 PM
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- Good luck in the contest with your great Michael Jackson Clerihew, Laura :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 1:15:00 PM
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Thanks, Anne Lise! It his is a fun form of poetry. I hope I did it right :)

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