Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson
Modern day Peter Pan
A child forever, in Neverland
Even Tinker Bell became a Moonwalk fan



Written on 5/28/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/30/2015 1:44:00 AM
cute last line on Tinker Bell. yes, he was sure a Peter Pan and he never got to grow old!
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:45:00 AM
A fantastic clerihew in mem'ry of one of my faves, my dear friend, Laura! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 5/29/2015 3:41:00 PM
Great Clerihew, Laura. You captured him...Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/29/2015 8:07:00 AM
This is a fun one!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Richard! I appreciate the kind comment and am glad you liked it :)
Date: 5/29/2015 3:47:00 AM
love the last line, laura.. very engaging.. haven;t done one yet.. is this for the contest?.. best winning wishes.. huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, and yes, there is a clerihew contest right now. This is my first time at this poetry form, as well.
Date: 5/29/2015 1:13:00 AM
A well-worded poem. Kudos! 7+
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, Hannington, for the kind comment and rating, too! :)
Date: 5/28/2015 2:22:00 PM
Good and GOOD LUCK in the contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Judy :)
Date: 5/28/2015 2:19:00 PM
I decided to change the last line, as I notice most Clerihew poems have a set rhyme. This is my first attempt at a Clerihew...am still learning :)
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Date: 5/28/2015 2:07:00 PM
very clever write laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2015 1:18:00 PM
cool good luck in contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:12:00 PM
Thanks, Skat :)
Date: 5/28/2015 1:06:00 PM
- Good luck in the contest with your great Michael Jackson Clerihew, Laura :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise! It his is a fun form of poetry. I hope I did it right :)
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