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Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson
Modern day Peter Pan
A child forever, in Neverland
Even Tinker Bell became a Moonwalk fan



Written on 5/28/2015

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2015 at 1:44 AM

cute last line on Tinker Bell. yes, he was sure a Peter Pan and he never got to grow old!

May 30, 2015 at 12:45 AM

A fantastic clerihew in mem'ry of one of my faves, my dear friend, Laura! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! love lots and big hug, Leonora

May 29, 2015 at 3:41 PM

Great Clerihew, Laura. You captured him...Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

May 29, 2015 at 8:07 AM

This is a fun one!

May 29, 2015 at 11:20 AM

Thanks, Richard! I appreciate the kind comment and am glad you liked it :)

May 29, 2015 at 3:47 AM

love the last line, laura.. very engaging.. haven;t done one yet.. is this for the contest?.. best winning wishes.. huggs

May 29, 2015 at 11:20 AM

Thank you, Nette, and yes, there is a clerihew contest right now. This is my first time at this poetry form, as well.

Hannington Mumo

May 29, 2015 at 1:13 AM

A well-worded poem. Kudos! 7+

May 29, 2015 at 11:19 AM

Thank you, Hannington, for the kind comment and rating, too! :)

May 28, 2015 at 2:22 PM

Good and GOOD LUCK in the contest!

May 28, 2015 at 2:23 PM

Thanks, Judy :)

May 28, 2015 at 2:19 PM

I decided to change the last line, as I notice most Clerihew poems have a set rhyme. This is my first attempt at a Clerihew...am still learning :)

May 28, 2015 at 2:07 PM

very clever write laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

May 28, 2015 at 1:18 PM

cool good luck in contest

May 28, 2015 at 2:12 PM

Thanks, Skat :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 28, 2015 at 1:06 PM

- Good luck in the contest with your great Michael Jackson Clerihew, Laura :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 28, 2015 at 1:15 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise! It his is a fun form of poetry. I hope I did it right :)

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