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Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson Modern day Peter Pan A child forever, in Neverland Even Tinker Bell became a Moonwalk fan Written on 5/28/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2015 1:44:00 AM

cute last line on Tinker Bell. yes, he was sure a Peter Pan and he never got to grow old!

Len Gasun

Date: 5/30/2015 12:45:00 AM

A fantastic clerihew in mem'ry of one of my faves, my dear friend, Laura! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! love lots and big hug, Leonora

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/29/2015 3:41:00 PM

Great Clerihew, Laura. You captured him...Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2015 8:07:00 AM

This is a fun one!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thanks, Richard! I appreciate the kind comment and am glad you liked it :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2015 3:47:00 AM

love the last line, laura.. very engaging.. haven;t done one yet.. is this for the contest?.. best winning wishes.. huggs

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Nette, and yes, there is a clerihew contest right now. This is my first time at this poetry form, as well.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/29/2015 1:13:00 AM

A well-worded poem. Kudos! 7+

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2015 11:19:00 AM

Thank you, Hannington, for the kind comment and rating, too! :)

Judy Konos

Date: 5/28/2015 2:22:00 PM

Good and GOOD LUCK in the contest!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:23:00 PM

Thanks, Judy :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/28/2015 2:19:00 PM

I decided to change the last line, as I notice most Clerihew poems have a set rhyme. This is my first attempt at a Clerihew...am still learning :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2015 2:07:00 PM

very clever write laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 1:18:00 PM

cool good luck in contest

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 2:12:00 PM

Thanks, Skat :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2015 1:06:00 PM

- Good luck in the contest with your great Michael Jackson Clerihew, Laura :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise! It his is a fun form of poetry. I hope I did it right :)