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Many would argue that far too few see the rapidly approaching consumerism apocalypse. 

Miasma Ripening by Odin Roark The chaff of greed Feeds the consumer-compost, While urban disquietude Marches in lockstep. Decomposition rages… Choked roads of sunbaked gridlock, Spider web into house upon house, Creating cubic-waste upon cubic-waste, Richer, Poorer, Fancier, Shittier. Drive by Reality… Poor eye the rich, Rich eye endless wants, Avarice-bloated ticks of debt Cruise side by side, Beamers in the middle lanes, Teslas in the fast lanes, Phony nails, Phony tans, Corporate coffee, Frilly coffee, Strip mall yoga, Storefront Scientology, Think it… You can buy it. “Parade” the operative word… As flesh and blood window-mannequins Masquerading as humans, Bedeck themselves in ugly clothes, Garish clothes, Supplied by the ever-surging China. Just as toxic denial continues, So too the enslavement’s rising stench, Its ripening enticement lingering, Its seductive aftertaste addictive, Oh, so addictive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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