Mia's Light

Dancing off the trees
shifting with the wind
shimmering light
caressing the
shore:
my midnight lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 9:45 AM
I absolutely love this..the ending is terrific...I am putting this in my faves..well done.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Very descriptive piece. Keep writing. Sara:)
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