Mi Musa

she asked she
said for me to
please por favor
slow down and

she heavily
breathing said
you're doing one
after the other and

as your
Muse i do
suggest that
you slow down 

your pace
has both of us 
in recessatation
so lets lock lips and

let me give
you the most
ever mind blowing
job poem you'll ever have
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May 14, 2019 at 1:49 AM
Jeff,be always fishhook, not fish ... go ahead with poetry work and as David once said, stay frosty ! salute alkas
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May 14, 2019 at 1:49 PM
Great words of wisdom Alkas. Better a hook than a Master Baiter. Jajaja. Love you Alkas!!!
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May 13, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Oh yes.
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May 13, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Oh yeah Maureen. As the Beatles once sang, "she does me like she do me/and you know she does". I hope that's an exact quote but you know what they meant jajaja
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May 13, 2019 at 7:16 PM
You are a strange strange man. Ha ha. But always entertaining. Stay frosty my friend.
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May 13, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Thank you David. Your comment is the best that I wish for as well as what people that explore caves hope to find.
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