Mi Luna

Luna as I watch you rise
I imagine my raven lover
painting her in delicate hues
as I always do in my dreams..

Mi Luna I am but a sailor
you the sea moon, Bella Luna
mesmerizing with your beauty and fullness
whose reflection ripples in the waters...

On the night I fell in love with you
I breathed her warm fragrance
spawned upon a gentle touch
on a sweet night of your clarity..

Oh Mi Luna
I ask that you do not drift away
you inspire the dream of love
it would bring me to much tears!

My beloved Luna
may you both be my love
I have sobbed for her under your sky
comforted by the truth you will never leave...

Mi Luna, shine upon our sea
from a distant shore I hear the mariachi
you are a moon of lovers
soft are your wings, blanca is your skin...

Heart crystal Luna
of the ocean
shine down on me...
~ ~ ~

beautifullovemoonfree verse

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Jayne Eggins

February 22, 2014 at 5:12 AM

Its all been said before me but this is really a beautiful work I thoroughly enjoyed the read, thanks for the read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated love Jayne :)

Ken Carroll

February 22, 2014 at 5:23 AM

Thank you Jayne!

Lucilla Carrillo

February 19, 2014 at 11:53 PM

Hola Ken, me gusto mucho tu poema. I am sure she shines on you all the time. gracias.... Lucilla

Ken Carroll

February 20, 2014 at 7:13 AM

Hola Lucilla y gracias por leer!

Nette Onclaud

February 19, 2014 at 2:14 PM

a reflective ambiance of mellow, sweet feeling, ken.. well done!.. huggs

Ken Carroll

February 19, 2014 at 2:17 PM

Thank you as always for visiting Nette!

M. L. Kiser

February 19, 2014 at 5:20 AM

Beautiful and passionate. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.

Ken Carroll

February 19, 2014 at 7:11 AM

Thank you M.L. for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2014 at 9:57 PM

Love how you mix in Spanish words. I should do that sometimes!! ( I sure would not do a great job using all Spanish though). You sometimes write of themes that I have used. I have one sonnet called His Life His Love, about a sailor and his love for the sea!! I think I put the moon into it too!

Ken Carroll

February 18, 2014 at 10:01 PM

Thank you Andrea for the wonderful comment..