Get Your Premium Membership

Mi Luna

Luna as I watch you rise I imagine my raven lover painting her in delicate hues as I always do in my dreams.. Mi Luna I am but a sailor you the sea moon, Bella Luna mesmerizing with your beauty and fullness whose reflection ripples in the waters... On the night I fell in love with you I breathed her warm fragrance spawned upon a gentle touch on a sweet night of your clarity.. Oh Mi Luna I ask that you do not drift away you inspire the dream of love it would bring me to much tears! My beloved Luna may you both be my love I have sobbed for her under your sky comforted by the truth you will never leave... Mi Luna, shine upon our sea from a distant shore I hear the mariachi you are a moon of lovers soft are your wings, blanca is your skin... Heart crystal Luna of the ocean shine down on me... ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/22/2014 5:12:00 AM
Its all been said before me but this is really a beautiful work I thoroughly enjoyed the read, thanks for the read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated love Jayne :)
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/22/2014 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Jayne!
Date: 2/19/2014 11:53:00 PM
Hola Ken, me gusto mucho tu poema. I am sure she shines on you all the time. gracias.... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/20/2014 7:13:00 AM
Hola Lucilla y gracias por leer!
Date: 2/19/2014 2:14:00 PM
a reflective ambiance of mellow, sweet feeling, ken.. well done!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
Thank you as always for visiting Nette!
Date: 2/19/2014 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful and passionate. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/19/2014 7:11:00 AM
Thank you M.L. for the visit.
Date: 2/18/2014 9:57:00 PM
Love how you mix in Spanish words. I should do that sometimes!! ( I sure would not do a great job using all Spanish though). You sometimes write of themes that I have used. I have one sonnet called His Life His Love, about a sailor and his love for the sea!! I think I put the moon into it too!
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/18/2014 10:01:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for the wonderful comment..
Date: 2/18/2014 5:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/18/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Sara..
Date: 2/18/2014 1:19:00 PM
- Oh ... so lovely poem Ken!! - Romance in the Moonlight - Have a enjoyable day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Carroll Avatar
Ken Carroll
Date: 2/18/2014 1:33:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely visit Anne..

Book: Reflection on the Important Things