Mi Corazon

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Wrap around 	me
just so

string yourself through the needle of time
chase the froth of foam lipping the tide
let my nascent heart tap 	with the tip of your toe
samba, slow dance, make romance 

Oh wrap yourself 	around me
just so

slide down the capo 	across the strings
through this opening in cosmic signs
birth the waiting wonder of my love	mi corazon
limb to limb	entranced, your head inclines

Wrap yourself around me
just so
just so

pluck me from the moving melody   of rhyme
dip with me as the moonlight strides
let my petals curl  with the click of heel I love you so	 
samba, slow dance, make romance 

Wrap around 	me
just so


*Meant to be sung to Peter White's song “Life Story”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/2/2014 3:59:00 PM
Oh Deb.....the Latin flavor you have given these lyrics are so perfect.... It suits the music in every way! I love it! Hmmm.....I'm trying to decide who shall sing it to do it justice !!!!
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Date: 9/2/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Carrie!
Date: 9/2/2014 7:39:00 AM
Love your lyrics Debbie and the style that wraps around with each verse! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/2/2014 5:29:00 AM
A beauty of a piece with picture, quite picturesque, Congrats. Deb. Light and Love.
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Date: 9/1/2014 7:46:00 PM
Oh, how I love your lyrics, Deb. I could feel the melody in each verse and loved the way you let it "wrap around" you. Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2014 4:48:00 PM
I sure enjoyed this one the best of them all, I think. I have not checked Carrie's yet but I have seen many of the others and this WAS my favorite among those others, I'm sure. Nette's very good too!!!
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Date: 9/1/2014 2:17:00 PM
i liked it when i first read it and i like it now. congratulations.
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Date: 9/1/2014 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Beautifully romantic dance poem.
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:47:00 AM
A great tune to dance to. The rhythm is just right. Love, daver
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Date: 8/18/2014 3:26:00 PM
wow. BEST one I've seen yet . It is so unique!!!
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Date: 8/15/2014 6:20:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Glad that you stopped by and got a chuckle..Cody came home with a pipe this time..He thinks it will be cheaper to smoke a pipe instead of the cigarettes..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:50:00 PM
you are so talented, this is a wonderful piece. there are so many talented poets/writers here. i am overwhelmed. thank you. inspiring.
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:20:00 PM
Isn't this beautiful and the tiny details make it more romantic and exquistely sensual.Going to my favs.. Btw-tnks for the haiku tip..Fixed it : )
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:32:00 AM
How do I find Notes to place the picture? Deb. Please help me
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:26:00 PM
I find this to be a stimulating piece of work! Vaya con Dios Matthew Anish
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