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Mi Amiga

I walked with you For just one mile today. I felt the joy Of reaching out And the touching Of our hands. I heard a sweet song In every word you spoke, And clearly understood The message of your heart. When I walked with you I never saw the hills we climbed, Or felt the many rocks Beneath my tired feet. Your awesome burden Seemed so light When added unto mine. I only saw the flowers Reflected in your eyes And felt the velvet Of your touch While pleasure soon became The destination of my path . . . . Now . . . Our walk has ended; The empty path seems wide, The weeds, the dust, and rocks Crowd every step I take. . . . Until . . . I think of you And the mile we walked today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2014 1:54:00 PM
Very Very Beautiful!! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this sensational poem with us. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/29/2014 12:06:00 PM
Congrats. Very nice.
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Date: 4/28/2014 5:44:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, william
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:03:00 PM
William... a great walk... i feel up lifted now... thank you for sharing... what a walk can do with the one you trust..pd
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William Crocker
Date: 2/4/2012 2:44:00 PM
Destroyer,Your response tells me alot about your spirit.Thanks for your comment. I'm impressed with your knowledge of all the types of poetry.I'll comment on some later.Crossfox.
Date: 2/2/2012 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful and romantick poem written William, I love it !! hand in hands- oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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