Methuselah Star

Those who do not die are known to live beyond the veil disheveled in the light like a Polaris star that lusters in the sky with gaseous shine; Although some stars are known to die very fast and very young, there are others that remain as constant as the Northern star; My dream is to arrive one day inside my Father's House a methuselah star of old light years away from birth; Oh how I wish to be the signage of His requiem, the agent of His blaze, the one that makes things visible. A gleaming star bequeathing light to all who perish in the night For those of them who live beyond the veil and never die like the Archangels "12", I do in askance ask, how long must I live in this heathen town, without His Godly gown. November 7, 2020 Sponsor: Silent One Contest Name: There Is A Star With My Name On It
*Methuselah star : Researchers say it can be as old as 14.5 billion years, but that would make it older than the calculated age of the universe? ...

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Date: 11/13/2020 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the information in a wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day......................
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Date: 11/12/2020 11:08:00 PM
An extraordinarily cool topic, educational for me, Pixie. Your Methuselah Star is so thoughtful, and gives every reader true grasp on concept of eternal life. 'The agent of His blaze' sounds brilliant and is heart warming. Excellent entry. Congratulations on your top Win!!
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:20:00 PM
Pixie, your deep and insightful poem reflects the talent of your golden pen. Your wishes and dreams are beautiful and inspiring. Your artistic spirit shines, dear poetess! Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2020 8:43:00 AM
A thoughtful and educational take on he contest.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, I am honored that you liked it. Stars are one of my favorite subjects, Have a great day.
Date: 11/10/2020 3:11:00 PM
Your piece is an impressively beautiful write, Pixie!! Good Luck in the contest!!
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Date: 11/7/2020 7:14:00 PM
Wishes do come true :) great poem, Pixie, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/7/2020 12:02:00 PM
14.5 billion years? Is the universe large enough for me never to encounter Trump again? Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/7/2020 4:14:00 AM
May all you wishes the star grant you--a shining poem you wrote, Vienna.
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Date: 11/7/2020 2:16:00 AM
A solid argument and get finale. ~~
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Date: 11/7/2020 1:25:00 AM
Such a wonderful write, your star will shine forever I’m certain. Good luck for the contest Pixie... Belle :-)
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